Friday, March 27, 2009

Life - A Vicious Circle


Life – A Vicious Circle!!!

We all have heard this, we live just one life. And that’s the chance to make the most of it.




At times it’s beautiful, at times it’s not.

At times, it’s the way it is and at times it’s adjust (ment).

At times it’s about me, at times it’s us. At times it’s about love, at times it’s just.

At times its everything, at times its must.

At times we seek more of it, at times it rusts.

At times it’s more smiles, at times its mad rush.

At times its what we want, at times its we have.

At times its what we say, at times its keeping mum.

At times its you only, at times we are lonely.

At times its being in love, at times it’s a tied dove.

At times its a lesson, at times it's frustration.


At times its what we gain, at times its my loss.

At times its about ambitions, at times its dreams.

At times we call it life, at times a Vicious Circle!

11 comments:

Ellen said...

Lovely piece, Jigyasa! :-) and one can pluck out a different life story from every line creating a rich arsenal of topics anyone may want to write about indeed. :-) You've got it all there.

Hope all's well and fine at your end. Always take care, dear friend. Wishing you all the best in life. God bless you and your family.

shoOOonya said...

At times, I wonder what deep thoughts are hidden in your mind.

At times, I wonder what emotions are hiddlen inside your heart.

Keep smiling and be Yourself ...

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Ellen & ShoOOonya

I am ok and let me tell ya....two of you are just great inspirations for me to write & write & write...Thanks a ton for being there!

Keep Smiling.....!

twilightreadings said...

Hey jigs..
Nice post for sure Life is a Vicious circle..
But thats what make it spicy right.. all the highs and lows .. lolss
Howdy?

Vamsi said...

@ jigyasa,

its toooo philosophical !

cheers !

Raman said...

Nice! Not everyone can express all their feelings through words. Keep up the good work.

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Aditi

Yeah all highs n lows.....life surely is a vicious circle!!

Keep Smiling

@ Vamsi

Hmm....I thought this philosophy has got a connect with everyone...what say?

@ Raman

Thanks for the visit and for leaving the encouraging words....

keep visiting! keep smiling!!

Jitu said...

Hi Jigs!

>:D<

Hmmm.... now that i am here... I seem to have a hundred quesions to ask you, a million thigs to say.... and yet.. I'm blank... I don't know where to begin and what to say.

Like your poem says... Life's at times a vicious circle.... And I seem to be running around around around. :D:D:D

Hopw things are different at you end ... :) Keep me posted.


And Jigs!! >:D< Thanks! It felt really nice to see you at my place... as tough I am seeing an old friend after looooooong.

I think my stay in US is making me nostalgic and melodramatic.. *unsure*

Anyways... >:D< once again... for the plasure of seeing you. :)

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Jitu

Thanks for the visit and the lovely words.........I am glad this post raise some questions....anyways feel free to ask me...!

Life is same with everyone.....and we all move around.....some enjoy the ride and others loose hope in the middle.....

I truly enjoy reading your poetry....be it the usual cold described unusually or the serious grief in serene words...

Keep Smiling!!

vijay said...

nice, really nice,

wont spoil it by long comments.

u a poet 2 :)

vs

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

Thanks VS :-)

Am glad you like it.