Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Mein Jigyasa...!!!!

Mein Jigyasa


Mein jigyasa
Sochu apni paribhasha
Kuch sehmi, kabhie nidarr
Kabhi nathkhat, kabhie niraash
Pairon mein zanzeerien par sapna mera chand ke paar,

Aaj khush hun….to jee jaungi..
Kal dukhi to….toot jaungi..
Chahun na koi sahara…samjhu khud ko besahara
Koi shaq nahi khud par…Shaq karti hun mein kismat par…
Udne ko parr failayun….aur hawa ke rukh ko badla paun…
Aasan manzil ho jati hai mushkil….
Jaane jeekar kya ho haasil..
Khushi se jeene ki har koshish…
Upri haansi aur andar kashish…

Chahun sabko hasta paun….
Kayi baar chahe apni khushi gawaun….
Rakhna sabko khush na paun….
Is dukh se phir bikhar mein jaun…
Kuch na kehkar mein gussa dikhaun….
Gar keh bhi du to khud ko akela mein paun..
Seham kar zindagi se; chup ho jaun…
Aur phir jeene ki alakh jagaun…

Mein jigyasa
Sochu apni paribhasha…
Khud mein khud ko dhoondti hun…
Mein murjhayein phoolon ko bhi umeed se soongti hun..
Hansti hun choti si baat par…
Kisi aur ka dukh dekhkar ro deti hun…
Kehti phirun mein sabse….khud jee sakti hun
Sab hote hai sang mere….
Lekin, akele mein khud ko mein tanha paun
Aur is tanhayi ke liye kuch kar na paun..
Thak kar apni in baton se….
Mein phir se khud ko samjhaun…
Khush rehne ki alakh jagaun
Aaankhein moond apni khushiyon ki
Muskaan liye sapno ki duniya mein kho jaun


Mein Jigyasa
Sochu apni paribhasha.......:-)

31 comments:

Echo said...

wow!!!lovely poem!!!i know of very few ppl who can write good poetry in hindi..u r one of them!!
u noe the poem talks to u...n u r sooo much like me!

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

Thanks so much Echo!! Thats a real encouragement. Yeah I realised about we being similar from your first post itself....

Take care. Keep Smiling!!

shoOOonya said...

read something so good after quite some time !! keep it going ... !!

Firefly said...

Every single syllable felt like it was something that reflected every minute thought and inner self of me..i am facing the same thing that ur poem depicted...

Nice read!!!

Care and Love
Sur!

vijay said...

hey Jigs,

hats off 2 U

aap chupey rustam niklee :)

bahut khoob likha hai,

bahut saral bhasha mey likha hai,

bahut deep meanings & feelings convey huaey hai, simple words mey

do keep writing :))))

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Shoooonya

Thanks a lot for the kind words....and as I always, be there always!!

Keep Smiling!!

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Sur aka firefly

Welcome to my space!! And I am glad that you can relate to my words...

Keep visiting.

Keep Smiling!!

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ VS

Thank you so much for the prompt response & lovely encouraging words...

Keep Smiling!!

Jitu said...

Hi Jigyaasa,

First o all... thanks for dropping by at my post...

and... coming here I realised... that if i had not read visited you now, I might have missed something too good to be missed. :)
Your poem is lovely... very ew people write in hindi these days... I mean proper hindi... most of them , including me, use a mix of hindi-urdu. Your poem... felt like a breath of unpolluted air. :) and that to with such simplicity.

way to girl. :)

hope to see a lot more of such dews, shimmering with feel, woven in words.:)

jitu said...

Tu jigyasa,
kyun pooche apni paribhasha.
yunn khili khili,
kabhii chanchal, kabhi ulhad,
pariyon ke se panh liye,
udti firo chanda par.

jab khush ho... jeevan do,
jab dukhi ho.. muskaan.
saari duniya, khush rahe,
ye karna hai mushkil,
sochna magar hai aasaan.

Jaa, pankh failaa,
udaan bhaar,
rukh hawa badal le agar,
tu bhii dekh zara,
apna rukh badal kar.

Ye koshisein ,
nahin hain naakaam.
jeevan hai inka anjaam.
thodi si hansii,
kahin pe khushii,
kuch khalish... kahin kashish,
jeena hai... isii kaa naam.

Aiy jigyaasa,
kyun dhondhe tu apnin paribhasha?
tu hulchal hai,
jeenein kaa,
tu kautuhal hai.
jeenaa hi teri abhilasha.

tu jigyasa,
jeevan hai teri paribhasha. :)

Busybee said...

Hi Jigyasa

:-) very well written.

like its all abt me...

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Jitu

Welcome to my space and honestly I am speechless to say anything on your review.....you just made my day and its a Superb encouragement!!!
And moreover, thanks for telling me that, "jeevan hai meri paribhasha"

Thanks so much & keep visiting!!!

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Busybee.....

Thanks so much.....I am glad that you liked it.

Technicolour said...

Oh my my.... lovely lovely lovely poem... just awesome... every word.. just donno what to say!!!

btw.. r u 4m o3??

Rups

vijay said...

hie jigyasa,

hows u doing?

anymore masterpieces coming up :))

vs

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Technicolor

Welcome to my space....and thanks for the kind words.....
Yeah.....like most of us....I too started from O3.

Keep Smiling!!

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ VS

Looking for time.....to convert my thoughts into words.....

Will post something shortly!!

Keep Smiling!!

Keshi said...

hey ty for stopping by my blog!

I dun u'stand Hindi but Im sure this is a lovely poem. :)

Keshi.

Pushkar said...

i dun think i hv ever read ne poem after ma school...but lucky to read this one...
this is " Beautiful"

gr8 work done jigs.. :)

vijay said...

Hey Jigyasa,

U have been tagged

vs

Scribblers Inc said...

whoever said "whats in a name", sure had it wrong!!:)

Scribblers Inc.

Vamsi said...

@ jigyasa,

apne aapko jaano, samjho aur phir tumhe apni paribhasha khud samajh mein aa jayega ...

nice poem ! :-)

cheers !

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Keshi

Thats very honest. Thanks!!

Keep visiting & smile always!!!

@ Pushkar

No thanQ for you....I am glad you reviewed on my space.

Keep Smiling!!!

@ VS

Give me some time....I will take the tag.

@ Scribblers

I guess so too.....even my mom says so...keep visiting!!

Keep Smiling!!

@ Vamsi

Finally you are here........and I am trying to solve the riddle called me.....thanks!

Keep Smiling!!

Anonymous said...

Jigyasa kee paribhasha, rahegi sirf abhilasha
vishal mann kee silvaton mien aseem tarangon mien lipt, ek tamanna,
ek khwaish, yeh jan ney kay liye ki aur kya hai jaan-ney kay liye
aur jaankar, janm dena ek nayee jigyasa ko, nirantar, antheen, sifar kee tarah ansuljhi.

Very nicely written, khalid

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

@ Khalid

So nice to see you back and that too on my space.....I am glad.

Kunal Garg said...

i dint kw u're a poet too!!
this 1's gr8 work!!
as far as my nowledge of peotry goes which is t dat gr8!!

shilpi said...

my god its unbelievable.how many more hidden talents you have.This is one the best poem I ever read.I had goose bumps yaar.so meaningful.gr8 work.

Jigyasa said...

@ Kunal

Better late then never.....I came back to read my this poem which I truly love....always and found that u liked it too...

Thanks for the nice words... :)

Jigyasa said...

@ Shilpi

When I read your comment I felt as if we know each other personally! Do we?

Nevertheless....i m glad you loved this poem....keep visiting!

Smile:)

A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart! said...

Reading ur poem, i felt, it had a reflection of me!

take care

RESTLESS

Jigyasa said...

@ RESTLESS

Glad for your visit & the reflection!

keep smiling!